Well, it's better as you threw in a little break... but it still doesn't change much. The track definitely sounds fuller, but the song structure could still use some work, imho. If you were to introduce a new section somewhere that completely changed the sounds used, like a bridge, and then went back to the main theme of the song... The sounds would not seem so old by the time the track ends. If you break away from the main theme, with another theme, when you reintroduce the main theme if creates excitement as the listener is hearing something familiar.
It could be a complete change up, or it could just be taking the bass out and creating a melodic part... but I feel the track desperately needs a change before the end. Another thing I think would help the track not get so stagnant is a change in the rhythm of your bass... It stays as eight notes the whole time. It sounds good when you change the note of the bass, but it would add more interest if you changed to triplets or quarter notes, or sixteenth notes... or a combination of those.
Don't get me wrong it's a good track. If you made a few changes though it would go from good to great.
