Twitch- Original production- Welcome

[Twitch]

Hey so this is like the second thing I have ever really done in reason. The first thing i am still working on and trying to make better. I feel pretty comfortable with this and just kinda want to get some feedback on it and see what people think. There are still some things i need to work on and some things i need to change in this to make it a bit better. But this is less than a day of work and pretty much the first thing i have done. Feedback, advice and criticism is greatly apprecated. Thanks everyone.

http://soundcloud.com/dj-twitch/welcome-17

[DJ Chi-Gu Kom]

track sounds cool in the begining but then that bass sound comes on and overpowers the rest of the mix. turn down the volume on it or eq it etc etc. shit made everything else hard to hear. the arrangement etc was pretty cool though. and maybe try to make a more focused mood. the melodies were kinda all over the place. all in all keep it up. only get better with time bro

[Adammatic]

Pretty cool starting track.  good wobbles to it but try telling a story with it and learn to build up the track. good job man!

[Wubber Stumpper]

Interesting track man. You could do better though.

[LOL I THINK IM A DJ]

Not bad for a start. It's a bit boring, but it's good for your first try. Keep it up, I see you getting better.

[CRiSiS]

Not bad... Sounds like some of the sounds go out of the key signature though. Do you know much about key signatures? If not definitely study up, as no matter how good you get if your out of key it will ruin the track.

Good start though, definitely looking forward to hearing more.

[Twitch]

thanks for all of the advice everyone. i am still working on this and trying to get it sounding better. i am actually really happy with how this turned out and if i told You about how long it took to do it would probably shock You all. hopefully i will have a better more complete version of this for spectacular spectacular i defiantly can't wait to get some other tracks going to share with You guys. it is defiantly some fun stuff

[Daniel5on]

Twitch , im feel like im right where you are , the major learning time . Where you get to know the program but also how music is structured and how to build. Good job on the the track though , definitely takes time!