"OVERCOME" by frasier grey

[5TR3NGTH 1N NUMB3R5]

heres somthing a little better.......im getting there just trying to get back into the swing of things

[Quad double oh!]

this is good shit!

[psilogod]

hi Frasier.

i like this one more than your last one but i feel like it is still kind of rigid sounding. Maybe use some reverbs and delays on your melodies to smooth them out and keep the fluidity.

Also, i hear a lot of harmonic discord, like the melodies aren't melodically fitting with your basslines and vice versa. I hear several notes clashing with each other throughout the song which you might want to play around with. It just sounds like a few notes are sharp or flat by a half note.

other than that...you have the basic sequencing skills down and can blend the right type of sounds together which is a plus. the recording is pretty decent as well...just keep working on the harmonic side of things possibly read some music theory books and you'll get better and better.

good work

[DJ Trox]

The drums sound too electro-y and flat......  you call it drum and Bass, well, it needs some drums and bass.  The two most important elements to drum n bass is the drum and the bass, and I'm jut not really hearing either.  You need some rolls and chop that ish up!

Keep on working on it tho.  Don't give up.... OVERCOME!

[LOL I THINK IM A DJ]

This is more IDM style than Drum n Bass. Still though, it's pretty good.

[ohshititsthemantis]

hi Frasier.

i like this one more than your last one but i feel like it is still kind of rigid sounding. Maybe use some reverbs and delays on your melodies to smooth them out and keep the fluidity.

Also, i hear a lot of harmonic discord, like the melodies aren't melodically fitting with your basslines and vice versa. I hear several notes clashing with each other throughout the song which you might want to play around with. It just sounds like a few notes are sharp or flat by a half note.

other than that...you have the basic sequencing skills down and can blend the right type of sounds together which is a plus. the recording is pretty decent as well...just keep working on the harmonic side of things possibly read some music theory books and you'll get better and better.

good work

Psssh fucking know it all 

I liked the track What are you working with?

[psilogod]

i thought i was pretty constructive