decent tune... it had a nice groove to it when the track got going in the middle... i just think it took a little too long to get there. i also think it would be good if you took the sound which you use as a lead, and make a melody out of it. not imediatly... but in the middle or towards the end... sort of like a bridge. you tease them with just the one note, and then for the bridge you play the whole melody, then go bak to just the one note... just a way to change it up...
i have also found that it sounds really good if you have a constant one note bass, to have the melody dance around the bass... or vice versa. if you have a funky bass line, then have it dance around a one or two note melody.
just a few questions for you... how long have you been producing? what do you use? do other people prouce with you, or just yourself? do you spin records?