well... pretty decent. it sounds similar to tracks of the style. but here are a few things that IMHO would make the track more interesting:
percussion is a little sparse. i like to hear an intricate drum/percussion track... fills in alot of space.
i think it could use work in regaurd to the drum density. the drums themselves don't have the phatness and punch that i like to hear in EDM. try to mix and match your drums, to phaten them up, using eq and envelopes.
there is hardly any pitched content, and no harmonies or melodic content at all. i know this is not a common theme with this type of music, but break out of the norm.
transitions could use a little work... i like to hear varied build ups and breakdowns. like a mini build up using a little fill or roll every so often, and huge build ups using rolls, fills, filter sweeps, maybe some noise filtered... there are all kinds of things to do....... another tip to make the song flow into breaks or builds is to use reverb, reverse reverb, and delay to make the illusion that the sound is creeping up or trailing off in the distance.....
over all sounds decent, but these are just some things my ear picked up, which i feel make a track more interesting.
keep them tracks flowing!
